Whew, it's been ages since I've been on good ol' eljay! But I didn't really know where else to go to look for TWEWY fandom. I just wish it was bigger so I could satisfy my need for fanfics more thoroughly. ;_;
This fic grabbed me and wouldn't let go, though. I dunno how I feel about it now that it's written down; pieces of it kept coming to me, single lines at a time, and I'm not one hundred percent sure that the complexities of Neku's feelings were expressed properly when everything was put together. I agonized over some sentences, because they felt terribly important to the piece as a whole and yet I couldn't quite get them right with the exact rhythm and connotations that I wanted. I think I like it overall, though, and it's the first piece of writing I've done in ages, so... I'd insert the little heart thingie here if I could remember how. T_T
( We will insert a fake cut here for the sake of cleanliness of my journal, even though I am the only person who will be looking at it and it's entirely possible that nothing else will ever be posted in it. I would like to explore Joshua's character a bit, but wanting and actually doing are two entirely different things. Besides, life is going to become DOOM shortly with all the stuff I have to do, not the least of which is NaNo. Maybe I should just write a Joshua/Neku fic for NaNo? XDD )
This fic grabbed me and wouldn't let go, though. I dunno how I feel about it now that it's written down; pieces of it kept coming to me, single lines at a time, and I'm not one hundred percent sure that the complexities of Neku's feelings were expressed properly when everything was put together. I agonized over some sentences, because they felt terribly important to the piece as a whole and yet I couldn't quite get them right with the exact rhythm and connotations that I wanted. I think I like it overall, though, and it's the first piece of writing I've done in ages, so... I'd insert the little heart thingie here if I could remember how. T_T
( We will insert a fake cut here for the sake of cleanliness of my journal, even though I am the only person who will be looking at it and it's entirely possible that nothing else will ever be posted in it. I would like to explore Joshua's character a bit, but wanting and actually doing are two entirely different things. Besides, life is going to become DOOM shortly with all the stuff I have to do, not the least of which is NaNo. Maybe I should just write a Joshua/Neku fic for NaNo? XDD )
